SSAY WRITING GROUP 3
1, TOPIC: The advantages of learning English
2. Mind mapping
3. Introduction
The advantages of Learning English
English, is an international language in the world. Most people are using this language on the daily life. It is an important language because we use this language to communication with other country's people. We also use English in many places. For example, it is used in the international business, computer language, movies, and so on. As a result, many people think learning English can get big benefits. Why we say learning English can get big benefits? Because you can become an international person, because you can communicate with any people in the world. If you know communicate in English You are very interested in all matters of work because English has become the official language of the world in a world or international language.
1, TOPIC: The advantages of learning English
2. Mind mapping
3. Introduction
The advantages of Learning English
English, is an international language in the world. Most people are using this language on the daily life. It is an important language because we use this language to communication with other country's people. We also use English in many places. For example, it is used in the international business, computer language, movies, and so on. As a result, many people think learning English can get big benefits. Why we say learning English can get big benefits? Because you can become an international person, because you can communicate with any people in the world. If you know communicate in English You are very interested in all matters of work because English has become the official language of the world in a world or international language.
because in my opinion this sentence should be added to the word that is most because to strengthen this argument that English the most important language, an example of changing sentences by adding the word most is: "It is the most important language because we use this language to communication with other country's people "must add the word most. If only the word Important without the word most makes the reader think that English is important (Penting). But, not most important (Tidak terlalu penting).
BalasHapusShould not put a comma in this sentence "English, is an international language in the world".
BalasHapuswithout having to add a sentence like this "of the world in a world or international language" Because we know that English has a culture of grammar that is different from the Indonesian language itself.
BalasHapusin essay writing about the advantages of learning English, I think the placement of other sentences is correct, just add a few sentences or words to support the introduction of essay writing better, because I have made based on mind mapping that I have made just add word for word reinforce the contents of the introduction.
BalasHapusEnglish is one of the most important international languages to use in work and business matters, and also as a lingua franca. we know English is a second language but the influence on the development of a country is huge. for example in every article or journal, it must be in English for that lesson, it is required to have to learn a little or know English. so this topic was raised based on thought distribution.
BalasHapusIn the introduction above, the discussion should be explained in general, and if it is related to the title above, "The Advantages of Learning English", the first thing to discuss is the understanding of language according to some experts. In addition, the introduction above does not have a "thesis statement" whose use is to clarify what needs to be discussed in the body.
BalasHapusat the beginning of the first paragraph, the English sentence, is an international sentence ... the English word should not put a comma.
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